That still sounds chosen-one-ish to me, even if you were created rather than discovered.
[All those audibly capitalised terms only hammer it in!! He may not be sure what a Sen-Mithrarin is, other than a damn capable warrior, but he gets a special talking sword reserved only for him! And the Moonblood Elder also doesn't sound like a random old man, especially since an arbitrarily selected village elder probably wouldn't be holding an artifact powerful enough to make a guy strong enough to defend the whole country! But honestly, he'd rather hear the rest of the story over some food and drinks - if Dust doesn't have other plans. He takes out a few of his totems.]
Do you have anywhere to be? If not let's go to the Red Springs or Camelot City for a meal. My treat.
[If Dust isn't up for it, no harm done. Hijikata usually isn't nosy, but he may just ask for more of his story when they next run into each other.
(But couldn't he just said that he's got totems before they climbed all the way up here?!).]
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[All those audibly capitalised terms only hammer it in!! He may not be sure what a Sen-Mithrarin is, other than a damn capable warrior, but he gets a special talking sword reserved only for him! And the Moonblood Elder also doesn't sound like a random old man, especially since an arbitrarily selected village elder probably wouldn't be holding an artifact powerful enough to make a guy strong enough to defend the whole country! But honestly, he'd rather hear the rest of the story over some food and drinks - if Dust doesn't have other plans. He takes out a few of his totems.]
Do you have anywhere to be? If not let's go to the Red Springs or Camelot City for a meal. My treat.
[If Dust isn't up for it, no harm done. Hijikata usually isn't nosy, but he may just ask for more of his story when they next run into each other.
(But couldn't he just said that he's got totems before they climbed all the way up here?!).]